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April 6, 2022
Naes Roniart
441 Alligator Alley
Gainesville, FL 32603
Dear Naes,
As you know, we have been working diligently on our funding efforts to support CAAW. Keeping a good track record of our finances is important so that organizations such as the Sunshine Do-Gooder Foundation are confident in supporting CAAW. If SDF is not confident in our financial responsibility, SDF will not provide us with the support we need to prevent alligator wrestling accidents in Florida.
When completing your request to retrieve documents on your desk, I noticed CAAW’s expense report files for the 2021 fiscal year. More specifically, I found that, during this year, we reimbursed a larger amount of miscellaneous expenses than in years past. Of the $300,000 worth of miscellaneous expenses, only $400 of those expenses had applicable receipts for reimbursement. This financial discrepancy could negatively impact our ability to attract future funding and sustain our mission. To protect CAAW and its mission, I have therefore decided to consult an outside auditor to help us locate where our missing $299,600 went. This auditor will carefully review our books to make sure all expenses and reimbursements are properly accounted for.
We can ensure the majority of our time is devoted to reducing alligator wrestling accidents by being proactive. Additionally, we can avoid any potential legal issues that may arise from ignoring this discrepancy, ensuring that CAAW will remain in good standing.
Thank you for your willingness to hear my perspective on the situation.
Sincerely,
Jeff Bags
Routine Message
Dear Mr. Goodboy,
Thank you for your interest in further discussing CAAW’s funding request. To continue our previous conversation, could we please schedule an hour-long zoom meeting to discuss potential funding opportunities with SDF? This funding would support outreach programs aimed towards combating the dangers of alligator wrestling.
Please let me know if you are available during any of the times below to meet next week:
· Monday 3/21 from 4pm-5pm ET
· Tuesday 3/22 from 2pm-5pm ET
· Wednesday 3/23 from 12pm-4pm ET
If none of these times work, please send an alternative meeting time.
I look forward to hearing about your recent trip to the Everglades when we meet!
Best,
Naes Roniart
Persuasive Message
TO: Ms. Goodies Twoshoes, FDGSS
FROM: Mr. Naes Roinart, CAAW
SUBJECT: Meeting Request for 24-29 Mar. – CAAW Investment Opportunity
DATE: 3/23/2022
Dear Ms. Twoshoes,
My name is Naes Roinart, and I serve as the CEO of Citizens Against Alligator Wrestling (CAAW), a non-profit organization based here in Florida whose mission is to raise awareness about the dangers of alligator wrestling.
Your organization has done an excellent job in the past at bringing awareness to similar social problems in Florida! A partnership with CAAW will help you pursue your mission of keeping Florida residents safe. It will also help you expand your donor base among residents of the Everglades and surrounding communities because these locations are where most alligator wrestling occurs.
Would you be interested in meeting sometime this week via Teams to discuss potential investment opportunities and explore a partnership between FDGSS and CAAW?
Below is my availability for the upcoming week:
· Thursday, 3/24: 12:00 PM EST
· Friday, 3/25: 9:00 AM EST
· Monday, 3/28: 10:00 AM EST
· Tuesday, 3/29: 4:00 PM EST
Please let me know if any of these times fit your schedule, or feel free to suggest another time that is more convenient for you.
Your organization continues to be an inspiring example of dedication to our community. I look forward to speaking with you and beginning a conversation about how we can best serve the residents of Florida together!
Best,
Naes Roniart
CEO, CAAW